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As the decades ravage our mortal shell, the inevitable will transpire, time to say goodbye, and let the next journey begin ! Free Download
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Hi we are Roger Peatman and Alan Gardiner Since late 2007 we have been writing and producing our own songs over 180 ORIGINAL songs in the Genre of ROCK DOOMTRAIN Creators of ROCK MUSIC ! https://www.youtube.com/@DOOMTRAINrocksongs CHEERS TO THE MUSIC ! THANK'S FOR YOUR SUPPORT ALAN/ROGER
Song Info
Genre
Rock Classic Rock
Charts
Peak #37
Peak in subgenre #9
Author
Gardiner/Peatman
Rights
Gardiner/Peatman 2012 All Rights Reserved
Uploaded
October 31, 2012
Track Files
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MP3 5.5 MB 128 kbps 6:01
Story behind the song
The final chapter of life.
Lyrics
MORTAL I HAD TO SEE THE FINAL TEAR ON THE CHEEK OF STRUGGLES LOST I TOOK THE HAND FOREVER STILL A VICTIM OF JUST GROWING OLD I SENSED THE FINAL BREATH BLOW SOFTLY ON MY CHEEK AND AS THE SORROW LESSENS THE PEACE WILL COME FROM WITHIN I CLOSED YOUR EYES A GENTLE BRUSH OF MY HAND I FELT THE SOUL ELEVATING ON A JOURNEY OF EVERLASTING TIME WE SHALL MEET AGAIN! FAREWELL
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decayingorbit
May 27, 2013
just amazing!!!! this is brilliant!!!
Michael Duran
Dec 24, 2012
Huge and powerful from the lyric to the crying guitar riffs this screams
MJBerg
Nov 12, 2012
Another great piece from the masters of this well defined genre. Some serious thinking behind the lyrics which go together really well with the instrumentation. Influences of Pink Floyd and the Pet Shop Boys, brilliant:)! Take care guys, Mauri.
DHW
Nov 11, 2012
Very powerful atmospheric dark dreamy sound... a great listen!
Dark Days of Youth
Nov 05, 2012
Very dynamic piece both musically and lyrically. Cool message effectively conveyed by the crying guitar and the lyrics. Well done.
Bob Forbes
Nov 05, 2012
Man - how I have been feeling your song description ;^)) Age seems to grow the wrong way... Love the heavy beat and hypnotizing guitars in this! Great Rock n Roll ballad!!
DRUMNJON
Nov 04, 2012
WOW, Such great spoken words..... You both have grabbed my soul... The Mortal.....will live on! Drumnjon
Rodrica Rudge
Nov 01, 2012
I don't like to make comparisons because every artist has their own uniqueness, but I do hear elements in this work that would make Pink Floyd proud to call this track their own. The message is all the more poignant by being spoken and the guitar work conveys the depth of emotion. Expertly composed and performed.
VMP (USA)
Nov 01, 2012
First of all amazing lyrics guys, stands up poetically sans music.....but out of the galaxy with the classic Doomtrain super-prog accompaniement! Sounding great as ever, super-cool dramatic chord changes, so well timed, passionate to the max, ultimate guitar work and tone as always. The spoken words are the ideal touch here, EXCELLENCE!
Michael Bennett
Nov 01, 2012
Great track Alan and Roger - you guys have concluded the journey and turned it into the grand finale. Brilliant!!!
ALPHA ONE OMEGA
Oct 31, 2012
Awesome work Guys This is the 1 we've been waitin for -DOOMTRAIN--\\ keepin Classic rock Alive * * * * *
LeeBoos
Oct 31, 2012
You guys sent me on a great journey. I really love the way you took your time on this one, all of the pieces fall into place. Very powerful production. Well Done! Lee
Carlo D'Anna
Oct 31, 2012
The definition of peace could be mortal silence. Interesting concept for a composition! This is way cool! A declarative masterpiece!
spinaceto
Oct 31, 2012
HI A&R, The new one (Mortal) is great, may be one of my favorite by now...although a really sad and serious theme , the music is fascinating and filled with plenty of feelings and mood! Another good piece of you two for sure: well done guys, a remarkable tune. Peace. -Spin-