Good choice of tempo (slower than original). The acoustic guitar figure is interesting, but it needs to have better tones; perhaps doubled/effects, synthesizer etc The gypsy styled scatting in between stanzas is EXCELLENT. With that touch you have created a first class version of this old standby. Go with that: more. Take it out with that kind of vocal improvising and then add more improvising, with instruments. I would definitely be interesting in arranging/producing/recording this one for you. It is an automatic winner. No publishing royalties though, of course. ;-|
Good choice of tempo (slower than original). The acoustic guitar figure is interesting, but it needs to have better tones; perhaps doubled/effects, synthesizer etc The gypsy styled scatting in between stanzas is EXCELLENT. With that touch you have created a first class version of this old standby. Go with that: more. Take it out with that kind of vocal improvising and then add more improvising, with instruments. I would definitely be interesting in arranging/producing/recording this one for you. It is an automatic winner. No publishing royalties though, of course. ;-|