I liked pretty much everything escept the beat..its not whack at all just a little empty but It gives u the room as writer to say what u gotta say. The Flow and tone real smooth player. The lyrics were detailed and that makes good writing but I didnt get drawn in like I was suppose to. Something were missing like howd u first meet her n sh** like that. It felt like I was watching a flick and I started from the middle. It was like I overheard your conversation to your lady and its sounds interesting but im missing peices. But it easy to tell u put effort in what u saying nahmean.
check out my song "why me" when u get a chance. I think u can dig that.
Stay up keep me posted
I liked pretty much everything escept the beat..its not whack at all just a little empty but It gives u the room as writer to say what u gotta say. The Flow and tone real smooth player. The lyrics were detailed and that makes good writing but I didnt get drawn in like I was suppose to. Something were missing like howd u first meet her n sh** like that. It felt like I was watching a flick and I started from the middle. It was like I overheard your conversation to your lady and its sounds interesting but im missing peices. But it easy to tell u put effort in what u saying nahmean. check out my song "why me" when u get a chance. I think u can dig that. Stay up keep me posted