simple song writing demos, country
No band these days... just a writer recording my own demo's.
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Hayley Oliver
Jun 06, 2008
Dawn,
this has always been my favorite song of yours, Beth's version of it is lovely too.
Love
Hayley
Dave Hanshaw
Feb 06, 2008
hey Dawn! Yes i remember beth singing this song! I did hot know you where the writer? congratulations on a well written song! great job! i have added this to my stion! keep on making great music! write On! Love, Dave
Paper Rock Scissors
Dec 20, 2007
Beautiful, sultry vocals, great lyrical imagery, nice accompaniment, great performance!
I feel this song goes very deep from a writer's perspective because this could be one of two things: (1) It could be a break-up, parting ways song, or (2) it could be that someone passed away unexpectedly. Either way, it's powerful and emotionally driven, and I can see why this song would be difficult to write even if it's not a reality in your life. The melody is great because it's pretty AND somber all at once.....and it's pretty quiet and laid back through almost the entire thing. So on the occasional parts where you do sing and play louder in the song, it feels like an out-break of emotion before containing yourself again. Excellent job. I love this one, as well.