Another "I love her, she doesn't notice me" song. It has a bluesy feel and attitude, but doesn't follow any blues format we're familiar with. What do you think?
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Story behind the song
Wrote and recorded in 2004, finally mixed it down in May 2019.
Lyrics
Intro verse:
Love lifts me like an ocean swell
Except when I'm by myself in love
It's got me feeling low
Verse 1:
Love lifts me like a falcon soaring
Except when she's ignoring my love
Doesn't notice my love
Overlooks my love
It hurts
Bridge 1:
Dream castles in the air
Love's supposed to carry me there
But right now love's so unfair
Chains me down to the stone
It's got me feeling low
Verse 2:
Love lifts me like a lofting kite
Except after she denies my love
Doesn't want my love
Turns her back to my love
It hurts
Bridge 2:
Please, God, open her eyes
Make her heart realize
My burning deep inside
Give me a spark of hope
So I won't feel so low
Outtro:
Low, low, low (four times)
Copyright 2004 A. Karpinski, BMI, all rights reserved.