Hey Patrick, 2 songs in one, cool thing.
The intro; Cool thunder and rain intro, an acoustic guitar, synth string, tasteful, a shaker- Not really sure if this is really in time rhythmically?
drums and more orchestra around your nice picking.
A nice easy listening melody evolving around synth arps.
Distorted lead guitar announces the beginning of the 2nd song with the vocals and lyrics.
Yes Patrick, that´s how it is. Nice images here, well sung.
Very good harmonies. Just some minor points. Somehow it sounds as if there was a chorus/flanging effect on the voc. I think I don´t really like it. Seems like it cuts the highs (that I would boost a bit!). Otherwise a very nice voice and pro-singing. I´d just love to have the tone even clearer!
The dist. guitar solo tone is great!
The little soundscape elements fit and don´t bother like natural sounds in song so often do.
Good and solid song here, especially the vocals, the strummed and the electric guitars are great. T
Hey Patrick, 2 songs in one, cool thing. The intro; Cool thunder and rain intro, an acoustic guitar, synth string, tasteful, a shaker- Not really sure if this is really in time rhythmically? drums and more orchestra around your nice picking. A nice easy listening melody evolving around synth arps. Distorted lead guitar announces the beginning of the 2nd song with the vocals and lyrics. Yes Patrick, that´s how it is. Nice images here, well sung. Very good harmonies. Just some minor points. Somehow it sounds as if there was a chorus/flanging effect on the voc. I think I don´t really like it. Seems like it cuts the highs (that I would boost a bit!). Otherwise a very nice voice and pro-singing. I´d just love to have the tone even clearer! The dist. guitar solo tone is great! The little soundscape elements fit and don´t bother like natural sounds in song so often do. Good and solid song here, especially the vocals, the strummed and the electric guitars are great. T