that's not my style man, sorry
for me it sounds like a collection of noises, too much going on, I like your lyrics but it is not mixed well.
just too much, you could try to notch out some frequenzies in the mid area with an EQ to give your Vocals more room, should be arround 500Hz, but you have to try...
Greetings
David Nathanael
that's not my style man, sorry for me it sounds like a collection of noises, too much going on, I like your lyrics but it is not mixed well. just too much, you could try to notch out some frequenzies in the mid area with an EQ to give your Vocals more room, should be arround 500Hz, but you have to try... Greetings David Nathanael