Comments
11
JC The Truth (NJ)
Nov 20, 2011
Not bad man, I see you. That hook was a little over the top, if the singer hit the notes a little better it would've been hot, but it needed to be more simplified cause the singing wasn't really on point.
Another thing that was a little over the top was the remixing and DJ effects throughout the verses... you wanna keep those simple as well.... remember the old saying... "less is more."
The storytelling was really good and I actually liked the lyrics and punchlines a lot, but it was all watered down with too many plugins.
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Da Artizt
Nov 17, 2011
Yo man I have to agree everything was koo until the 2nd Vers it comepletly fell apart too many affects I mean maybe one in each vers MAYBE. and the people clappin during the hook... not necessary. If you re do it and remove some of the affects im sure it'll turn out better... Stay Up Homeboy...
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ac on da beat productions
Nov 14, 2011
Great track, the concept is well formulated and the quality is on point. There's always room to improve! I feel like it could have been produced better especially when it came to the effects used.
Capo aka iHop Borders
Nov 13, 2011
Dude....
I'm sorry, but no. The concept and the beat wasn't bad, but the tracks sounds...overproduced. Lol. Those stutter effects, I ain't feeling them. Some effects sound good, but only used sparingly. I just wanna hear you flow without anything interfering sometimes, ya dig? Your verses(lyrics) were the highlight of the track.
I don't know...I feel like the track didn't reach its full potential. It still wasn't really BAD, just not your best.
I posted up something new, but I'm not sure what to think of it myself.
C3RTIFIED MUZIK
Nov 07, 2011
This is dope bro.. real ish.. I like how yall chopped n edited it too
GSoulBeats
Nov 06, 2011
Nice track bro! Like it..
Jrum Beats
Nov 06, 2011
Yo this is nice Armando, i like this alot. The stutter FX are ehhh i dont really like those. But your flow is always nice, the vocal mix you could use a little work on the tremble. Sounds kinda muddy. But the overall song is tight brah
Supermanedope
Nov 06, 2011
wow! nice song!
Imani VMR
Nov 04, 2011
I have to be real wit u homie ...but this one was a disaster and not because of you tho ....your verse was Ill as F*** however the production ....did wayyyy tooo much and there were parts where the scratch and whatever the hell u call what they was doin was off beat killed the tempo and overshadowed the actual feel of the song ....whoever sung the hook would of done better without the effects ...I think it took from the hook ...Truthfully Redo this without all them effects keep it natural all that Bull sh** is that Commercial Bull sh** that is Not Hip Hop ...Your Way bigger than that fa real....stay u ...keep the mastering up but lose all them attempts to sound like main Stream that is Killin u dude ....your a Great artist ...I mean some tracks sound good wit that sh** but this one was way over board and the saying goes less is more ....in this case true Statement .... I respect u enough to tell u the truth ...
not Like these other fake ass Dick Riders on Soundclick I keeps it 100
AtomicBeats
Nov 03, 2011
Really good! Beat is cool to
woop *thumbs up*