I think the tracks content is good. I'm not feeling that vocal sample, I don't know with this kind of quality it is just distracting. It took away from your part cause I was trying to figure out what she says. Anyways I think you delivery would sounds a lot better if you somehow found a away to make your vocals stand out a little more. Your flow was good on this, and your lyrics were cool. Overall it's a track with potential that you should take time to develop to the fullest.
I think the tracks content is good. I'm not feeling that vocal sample, I don't know with this kind of quality it is just distracting. It took away from your part cause I was trying to figure out what she says. Anyways I think you delivery would sounds a lot better if you somehow found a away to make your vocals stand out a little more. Your flow was good on this, and your lyrics were cool. Overall it's a track with potential that you should take time to develop to the fullest.